Larry Bradfield Poet Couplet

A Thousand Rooms

Yonder stands the house with a thousand rooms
See it from afar before darkness looms
It stands forever as we measure time
One second ends forever at the chime

Take pleasure in each room for what it brings
Move to the next before the buzzer rings
As life progresses roughly door to door
Take heart that there's at least one second more

2-1-20
Contest: The Meld Of Muses
Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Heidi Sands February 1, 2020 at 11:22 PM Oh, I enjoyed this. Interesting. Well done :) Larry Bradfield February 2, 2020 at 12:14 AM Thank you Heidi...I was not very confident in the work

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 1, 2020 at 11:00 PM Captivating and fascinating, with a great rhyme scheme. Larry Bradfield February 2, 2020 at 12:14 AM Thank you, Evelyn!