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A Thought Before the Sabbath

The door closes on the past week No more to strive, to work, to seek Enter an oasis in time, to reflect and refresh ~ to exalt the spirit over the flesh

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Date: 9/23/2023 2:14:00 PM
A thoughtful piece worthy of pondering.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/23/2023 9:05:00 PM
I thought so too, actually. (Started it at 6:21 p.m; posted at 6:28 p.m., when I had to get off the computer for 25 hours.). Sometimes good stuff can come from a looming deadline...
Date: 9/22/2023 8:26:00 PM
It wouldbe amazing to see all the candles glowing, and the silence would capture a feeling of holiness to all. It would refresh both mind and spirit to face the week ahead with joy in your heart. I loved this couplet, Gershon, a fav for me, Thank you.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/23/2023 9:14:00 PM
Gosh! Thank you so much for the fave, Shirley. Always special for me. Light and Illumination, gw
Date: 9/22/2023 5:58:00 PM
I like the sound of that. John
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Date: 9/22/2023 4:31:00 PM
So wonderful!
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