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A Thin Line

a thin line sparks combustibles, hot spots on the palms of your feet, ignored ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
l i k e d r i p p i n g w a x ~ until ~ ~ you’re ~ in ~ ~ too ~ deep 9/23/2017

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Date: 9/23/2017 9:25:00 PM
Hi Kim, this is very creative ..Very nicely done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2017 9:41:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph!
Date: 9/23/2017 2:35:00 PM
- Love it, Kim !!! :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2017 2:42:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! You too! Has been good went to the fair with grands. Tired and booked more to do tonight. Coffee!
Date: 9/23/2017 9:44:00 AM
Nice! Fabulous shape poem :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen!
Date: 9/23/2017 7:34:00 AM
This is such a lovely depiction---an artful display of creative thought--only a genuine gifted mind could create!
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Date: 9/23/2017 7:12:00 AM
fabulous creative shape poem Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan! Your comments mean a world to me! Hugs, Kim :)

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