Kim Rodrigues Poet Shape

A Thin Line

a thin line sparks combustibles, hot spots on the palms of your feet, ignored    
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9/23/2017

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Joseph May September 23, 2017 at 9:25 PM Hi Kim, this is very creative ..Very nicely done Kim Rodrigues September 23, 2017 at 9:41 PM Thanks, Joseph!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2017 at 2:35 PM - Love it, Kim !!! :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues September 23, 2017 at 2:42 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise! You too! Has been good went to the fair with grands. Tired and booked more to do tonight. Coffee!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 23, 2017 at 9:44 AM Nice! Fabulous shape poem :) xomo! Kim Rodrigues September 23, 2017 at 1:21 PM Thanks, Maureen!

Vijay Pandit September 23, 2017 at 7:34 AM This is such a lovely depiction---an artful display of creative thought--only a genuine gifted mind could create!

Jan Allison September 23, 2017 at 7:12 AM fabulous creative shape poem Kim:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues September 23, 2017 at 7:13 AM Thanks so much, Jan! Your comments mean a world to me! Hugs, Kim :)