A Thin Line

Laughter

Spontaneous, Unexpected

Gurgling, Bubbling, Bursting

Children, Grandmas, Curtains, Funeral

Hurting, Suffering, Resenting

Lonely,  Painful

Despondency
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Well done diamante. Your poem is a quick whirlwind tour of life. Superb.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Thank you, Line. You just summed up what I had strived to do.
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