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A Thin Line

Laughter

Spontaneous, Unexpected

Gurgling, Bubbling, Bursting

Children, Grandmas, Curtains, Funeral

Hurting, Suffering, Resenting

Lonely,  Painful

Despondency

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/16/2018 2:51:00 PM
Well done diamante. Your poem is a quick whirlwind tour of life. Superb.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/16/2018 2:59:00 PM
Thank you, Line. You just summed up what I had strived to do.

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