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A Tearful Song

I still hear your name in the silent night… It drifts away from my teary sight… I couldn’t stand or breathe on my own… The same old story with the pages torn… But you went away leaving me to be strong… A masking smile and a tearful song… My strength sits in my words… All through the day it screams to be heard…

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/9/2014 11:57:00 AM

Michael; This is sad and beautiful. My strength sits n my words. I really like that line. Michael - it's been a long time, but I have been very sick for over a year now. I hope you are alright... Lucilla

David Williams

Date: 5/7/2014 12:52:00 AM

Michael I like this, how are you my buddy....

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/19/2014 3:56:00 AM

Sad but very beautiful revealing a broken heart. Blessings

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2014 12:56:00 AM

How are you Michael? LINDA

Funom Makama

Date: 1/24/2014 3:35:00 PM

What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/22/2014 3:45:00 AM

Hi Michael, hope you're doing well. I love this poem - well written and smooth flowing. It's not easy to forget those who touch our lives even when they are gone. Very well written!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 5:26:00 AM

Michael, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/22/2013 11:41:00 AM

- A little sad but as always a beautiful poem Michael! - I wish you and your loved ones an enjoyable Christmas - I hope the year 2014 will be a peaceful year. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/25/2013 12:31:00 PM

such a poignant write...but beautifully penned...I was glad to see this poem, where have you been my friend???

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

Date: 11/23/2013 3:25:00 PM

Hi Michael, hope you are keeping well, this is a lovely yet sad poem, stay strong, love as ever Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2013 11:18:00 PM

a sad one, and a poem I really loved seeing tonight. Where have you been, Michael?

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/22/2013 6:43:00 PM

This is a beautifully well written write! I am surely impressed with this brilliant poem here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!