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A Teardrop Falls

A teardrop falls deeply—slicing and aching  
hurt twisting knots around the deepest fingers 
love you from my heart warmest emotions so 
in each kiss of your beauty I feel all of you 
worth the suffering and pain that happens 
gaining rewards in the end—undiminished love 
happiness such a precious gift for us forever 
the teardrop falls now freely in your honor
it spills warmly and gently in your name love 
as grace is my honor to bear this noble sacrifice 
with joy and I find you now my sweetest sunshine 
with happiness being my one-way ticket to paradise 

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (June 9, 2015)
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Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2015

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Robert Lindley Date: 6/12/2015 3:09:00 AM Just now found this superb write my friends. Forgive me my absence and lack of time here as of late. I love this co-write and the smoothness makes it appear to be a single author! Bravo to both poets.. A7 Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:44:00 PM Hello Robert . . . I'm sure Liam will be replying soon. Yup, we've both gotten much better with the synchronicity of making these co-writes more of a voice of one. Liam, I know, has a similar view. Best Always, Gary

Kelly Deschler Date: 6/9/2015 6:17:00 PM I felt that teardrop as it fell and changed from tears of sadness to joy... An excellent poem and collaboration between you and Gary! Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:46:00 PM Thanks Kelly on my end . . . I'm sure Liam will reply soon in turn. (My second book will feature a number on our new co-writes.) Liam's a charm to work with. Best Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/9/2015 12:12:00 PM Hi Liam n' Gary!Another very beautiful romantic,sweet love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam,and in collaboration with our very dear friend Gary.Very beautifully written.A real gem!Filled of so much love,teardrops fall from suffering pain n' joy,warm feelings n' emotions,beautiful hopes and dreams of true love and happiness forever.I love it!A very beautiful,romantic passionate dreamy sweet love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I truly enjoyed it.Just awesome!Great collaboration!A 7+++ to each!A fav.Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:49:00 PM Thank You Dearest "D" on my end. Liam will be around soon too, to reply. Glad you liked this piece. Best Wishes, Gary

Emile Pinet Date: 6/9/2015 11:12:00 AM Gentlemen, your feelings leap out of your words and ignite the emotional fires alive within your verses. Emile. Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:48:00 PM Thanks so much Emile!! Liam will probably reply soon to you as well. Best Wishes, Gary

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/9/2015 9:33:00 AM the sentimentality of your work charms me no end.. wonderful collab, liam and gary.. huggs Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:50:00 PM Thank you so much Dear Nette!! Best Always, Gary

Tim Smith Date: 6/9/2015 9:23:00 AM Such a beautiful piece gentleman.... It reminded me of yesterday saying goodbye to a dear friend....a 7 and fav Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:51:00 PM Thanks Tim from 1/2 of the team here. And thanks for the "7" + FAV. Liam will be jumping up and down on that!! Best Always, Gary

Wilma Neels Date: 6/9/2015 7:51:00 AM This is a beautiful collaboration Liam and Gary :) Enjoyed this gem this afternoon. Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:52:00 PM Thanks Wilma -- glad you enjoyed it!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/9/2015 7:38:00 AM - A beautiful way to say: I love you! - .... "One-way ticket to paradise" for two :) - I wish you a wonderful day, Liam and Gary :) - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:42:00 PM Thanks Dear Anne-Lise!! I'm sure Liam will be replying soon too!! Best!! Gary

Jan Allison Date: 6/9/2015 7:29:00 AM such a beautiful emotional write Liam and Gary:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/13/2015 4:53:00 PM Thanks Jan!! Best, Gary Liam Mcdaid Date: 6/13/2015 3:12:00 PM thank you jan with garys pen this flowed golden in my eyes wonderful comment pal wishing you a lovely weekend

Gary Bateman Date: 6/9/2015 6:50:00 AM Liam Mate!! I just wanted you to know that I really enjoyed our collaboration and discussion on this new Verse write: " A Teardrop Falls." I think our end result here speaks for itself. Thanks for posting it too!! Best Wishes Always, Gary Login to Reply Liam Mcdaid Date: 6/13/2015 3:08:00 PM it was truly a pleasure joining pens with you gary thank you deeply pal for the honor passing you a warm smile