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A Teardrop Falls

A teardrop falls deeply—slicing and aching hurt twisting knots around the deepest fingers love you from my heart warmest emotions so in each kiss of your beauty I feel all of you worth the suffering and pain that happens gaining rewards in the end—undiminished love happiness such a precious gift for us forever the teardrop falls now freely in your honor it spills warmly and gently in your name love as grace is my honor to bear this noble sacrifice with joy and I find you now my sweetest sunshine with happiness being my one-way ticket to paradise Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (June 9, 2015) (Verse)

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/12/2015 3:09:00 AM

Just now found this superb write my friends. Forgive me my absence and lack of time here as of late. I love this co-write and the smoothness makes it appear to be a single author! Bravo to both poets.. A7

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:44:00 PM

Hello Robert . . . I'm sure Liam will be replying soon. Yup, we've both gotten much better with the synchronicity of making these co-writes more of a voice of one. Liam, I know, has a similar view. Best Always, Gary

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/9/2015 6:17:00 PM

I felt that teardrop as it fell and changed from tears of sadness to joy... An excellent poem and collaboration between you and Gary!

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:46:00 PM

Thanks Kelly on my end . . . I'm sure Liam will reply soon in turn. (My second book will feature a number on our new co-writes.) Liam's a charm to work with. Best Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/9/2015 12:12:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Gary!Another very beautiful romantic,sweet love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam,and in collaboration with our very dear friend Gary.Very beautifully written.A real gem!Filled of so much love,teardrops fall from suffering pain n' joy,warm feelings n' emotions,beautiful hopes and dreams of true love and happiness forever.I love it!A very beautiful,romantic passionate dreamy sweet love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I truly enjoyed it.Just awesome!Great collaboration!A 7+++ to each!A fav.Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:49:00 PM

Thank You Dearest "D" on my end. Liam will be around soon too, to reply. Glad you liked this piece. Best Wishes, Gary

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/9/2015 11:12:00 AM

Gentlemen, your feelings leap out of your words and ignite the emotional fires alive within your verses. Emile.

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:48:00 PM

Thanks so much Emile!! Liam will probably reply soon to you as well. Best Wishes, Gary

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2015 9:33:00 AM

the sentimentality of your work charms me no end.. wonderful collab, liam and gary.. huggs

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Dear Nette!! Best Always, Gary

Tim Smith

Date: 6/9/2015 9:23:00 AM

Such a beautiful piece gentleman.... It reminded me of yesterday saying goodbye to a dear friend....a 7 and fav

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Tim from 1/2 of the team here. And thanks for the "7" + FAV. Liam will be jumping up and down on that!! Best Always, Gary

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/9/2015 7:51:00 AM

This is a beautiful collaboration Liam and Gary :) Enjoyed this gem this afternoon.

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:52:00 PM

Thanks Wilma -- glad you enjoyed it!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2015 7:38:00 AM

- A beautiful way to say: I love you! - .... "One-way ticket to paradise" for two :) - I wish you a wonderful day, Liam and Gary :) - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Dear Anne-Lise!! I'm sure Liam will be replying soon too!! Best!! Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 6/9/2015 7:29:00 AM

such a beautiful emotional write Liam and Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2015 4:53:00 PM

Thanks Jan!! Best, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 6/13/2015 3:12:00 PM

thank you jan with garys pen this flowed golden in my eyes wonderful comment pal wishing you a lovely weekend

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/9/2015 6:50:00 AM

Liam Mate!! I just wanted you to know that I really enjoyed our collaboration and discussion on this new Verse write: " A Teardrop Falls." I think our end result here speaks for itself. Thanks for posting it too!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 6/13/2015 3:08:00 PM

it was truly a pleasure joining pens with you gary thank you deeply pal for the honor passing you a warm smile