A Tear

it escaped , it ran

   ran unbidden and unchecked

     ...  a trail left on cheek



by Francine Roberts

for the' personify of a tear' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

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Brown Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 4:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Francine. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Stunning write Francine, congratulations to you ;)
Freeman Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Great to see you in the winner's list, Francine. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Congrats Francine on your well deserved win in the contest---kash
Horne Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )
Sweetheart Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 4:45 AM
Congrats Francine on your success in HG's contest on tears with this wonderful entry my friend..enjoy your sweet success with luv for a great poem of expression...
Mehta Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 4:37 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Francine
Esquire Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Dear Francine, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 12th Place Win LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege... HG
Mannan Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Powerful one Francine. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.
Knop Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 3:55 AM
Great write, Francine! Thank you for commenting Jack's and mine collaborative poem!..Best of luck for the contest...Gert:)
Greenlee Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 9:52 PM
Wonderful!Thanks for your comment on WILDLIFE TRAINING.Hope you liked.Sincerely...
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April 1, 2011 at 4:11 AM
Eloquent -- much said in a brief form. You have a winner here, Francine. Love, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 2:47 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
Poet Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Wonderful Senryu here!Enjoyed--kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 9:48 PM
Yes Francine .. a trail left on cheek .. great lines in your Senryu luv.. much success in the new contest by HG.. very life like..luv..
Freeman Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 6:27 PM
I am sure it is a winner Francine, The best to you in the contest. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Reads like a winnner...Sara
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