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A Tale of Two Hearts

One heart is forever scarred The other, oblivious to the pain One heart feels a terrible loss The other, no loss or gain One heart feels hopeless regret The other, no regret can be found One heart cries out with blame The other, not even a sound One heart keeps looking for fault The other, no reason or rhyme One heart hangs on to the past The other, no concept of time One heart keeps looking for answers The other, not wondering why One heart looks for a chance The other has said goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/21/2010 9:17:00 PM
Great one.
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Date: 4/20/2010 12:45:00 PM
Obviously best for both hearts.
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Date: 4/20/2010 3:59:00 AM
Oh no, very nicely penned!! Romantically excellent!
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Date: 4/20/2010 3:10:00 AM
nice one, pd
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Date: 4/20/2010 2:50:00 AM
Sorry Larry haven't had my 2nd coffee yet not fully awake here in the uk ....Allie
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Date: 4/20/2010 2:48:00 AM
Great write James such an honest and true way of portraying a break up...loved it...Allie
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