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A Symphony

deminished pastels a symphony for the eyes royal colors swell

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David Williams

Date: 5/15/2012 3:39:00 AM

Terry now this is great, Love it..David

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/15/2012 3:22:00 PM

Thank you David for your kind words and for stopping by to review. Huggs TLee

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/14/2012 2:22:00 PM

Still another 'form'... yet again very nice... :)) Terry

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/14/2012 7:22:00 PM

This is a standard 5-7-5 and you have read other Senryu that I have done and this is a standard 5-7-5. Hi my friend TLee.

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/14/2012 9:45:00 AM

Fantabulous write!!! Terry!! love your Senryu!! you go girl!! :) the flower blooms ;) lol ....big hugs, love ya deb

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/14/2012 7:31:00 PM

Thanks Deb I am glad to see that I had not been too obtuse or vague with this one as you seemed to have no problem getting it. Love ya TLee

John Rhinem

Date: 5/14/2012 9:07:00 AM

Ps. Smile ˜ "Beauty Is Beauty, Be It Here Or Be It There, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Terry &, Thank You, For Your Precious Heart's Kind Visit; 'Joy * My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ˜

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/14/2012 7:35:00 PM

So how is the Soups Don Juan tonight? Thanks for your tintilating review. lol Huggs TLee

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2012 8:29:00 AM

I too love the imagery here Terry, awesome. harry

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/14/2012 7:37:00 PM

Thanks Arry lol. Nice of you to stop by. Huggs TLee

Kash Poet

Date: 5/13/2012 9:04:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this senryu,Terry.Love it!

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/14/2012 7:39:00 PM

I am so pleased that everyone understood that I was talking about flowers. Thanks my friend TLee.

John Rhinem

Date: 5/13/2012 7:24:00 PM

Smile ˜ "Makes Me Envision, Pure Beauty, My Dear Precious & Beautiful Terry * Sweeling Amid These Endless Colours Of Love, Deep, Inside One's Heart ˜ 'Beautiful * My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ˜

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/13/2012 9:59:00 PM

Thank you for your eloquent words and kind review John and as always it nice of you to come visit. TLee

Date: 5/13/2012 7:26:00 PM

...."Tis Suppose To Read, 'Swelling Amid These Endless Colours Of Love.'" *