A Surprise 18th Birthday Party
Late night, at 12 they all had come...
full of surprises, it was fun!!
My face was actully full of cake,
by that time I was totally awake!!
My 18th birthday party will be memorable in life,
distinguished by cutting two cakes with a knife.
With chips and cakes spread all over the party,
The only time when mommy smiled when the carpet became dirty...
I thanked all my loving friends,
who had come all the way from the other ends!
I hope God could just repeat this day,
This was my 18th birthday!!
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