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A Surprise 18th Birthday Party

Late night, at 12 they all had come... full of surprises, it was fun!! My face was actully full of cake, by that time I was totally awake!!
My 18th birthday party will be memorable in life, distinguished by cutting two cakes with a knife. With chips and cakes spread all over the party, The only time when mommy smiled when the carpet became dirty...
I thanked all my loving friends, who had come all the way from the other ends! I hope God could just repeat this day, This was my 18th birthday!!

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Date: 10/31/2014 5:33:00 PM
Oh I hope you had a wonderful time:-) hugs jan xxx
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Sakshi Sitoot
Date: 12/14/2014 3:08:00 AM
thankyou jan!!
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Sakshi Sitoot
Date: 12/14/2014 3:08:00 AM
thx

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