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A Sunny Day

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Illustrating erectness in such a bright sky. Soon, the sky turned from blue to dark gray. Rhizomes of two giant oak trees. Interweaving as beauteous poems breeze. Rustling branches without groans or smoke. The lightning strikes the killing stroke. It echoed the most powerful thunderclap. A lifetime spent together, was under the cap.
Written: November 09, 2022

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Date: 11/9/2022 1:07:00 PM
Intertwined with human emotions --you depict a beautiful sunny day that darkens and thunders.
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