A Summer Snowstorm Cold

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Another weird day... that Mother Nature... sent my way.

As I was sitting in my rowboat...at a pond at Martha's Vineyard 
I was fishing with my headphones on...listening to Lynyrd Skynyrd
Suddenly, a chilling wind...my god, I almost froze 
While fishing with some sun-block on...a snowflake hit my nose 
With "Freebird" blasting in my head...I paddled to the shore 
I beached my boat, got dressed for winter...and fished a little more
As I rowed my boat to my fishing spot...the wind and snowflakes ease 
The sun came out and warmed me up...fishing was a breeze 
The temperature had dropped that day...as the summer was getting old 
But heck, the only thing I caught that day...was a summer snowstorm cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/6/2018 8:13:00 AM
Hello Charles, I am so sorry that you caught a cold. Mother's nature weather is strange. Sometimes she does not know what she wants. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/8/2018 4:24:00 AM
Ah, your poetry has got great visual , yes the weather has been so unpredictable lately. Glad you got some fishing in, sad you got a cold. Nice poem dear Charles, thank you for sharing and have a great day.
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:41:00 AM
Like Tom said, that's global warming for you...Thank you so much, Dixie. You as well, have a great day!
Date: 11/7/2018 3:55:00 PM
This is an awesome write! Chuckling! Fave!
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thank you for favoring this, Kim. I've read some of the poems for your contest. You have you're hands full...Best wishes!
Date: 11/7/2018 2:49:00 PM
Brilliant, Charles. Love it. A FAVE.
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line. I am thrilled it's a fave for you.
Date: 11/7/2018 10:40:00 AM
Lynyrd Skynyrd and a summer snowstorm ...what a show, Charlie...have any extra tickets my friend lol...lovely write...^WW^
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:46:00 AM
If I had tickets, you would be the first I would send them to. Awesome show it was...Love & "Snowbird" ^CM^
Date: 11/7/2018 10:32:00 AM
That's global warming for you Charlie, may I suggest a hot toddy. Tom
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:47:00 AM
Good Idea Tom. LOL And you are right, that's global warming. Charlie
Date: 11/7/2018 9:03:00 AM
Oh my! A summer snowstorm cold. Not good. I hope it is better now. But this poem is great with how you explained what happened on your fishing trip in the weather! I enjoyed it :)
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Date: 11/7/2018 9:19:00 AM
Ah, feeling much better now. Thank you so much, Heidi...for your kind words! Glad you enjoyed this...:)
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