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There, a quaint trattoria was near We chose some bagels, sharp cheese and beer. The waitress told us of a fine beach Indeed it was quite within our reach. Found the shore, the sea was calm that day. It won't be easy to go away. The yellow sand wet and clean, barefoot We must never stumble nor stay put. So many seashells adorned this place. "I'll make you a necklace with true grace." The sea billowed softly in and out Should we have a swim or do you doubt? We'll surf and dive beneath the deep waves Search for some forgotten coral caves. At last, we decided to leave for home. Satisfied of our wandering roam.

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Date: 6/2/2021 9:44:00 AM
A wonderful day by the sea, just you and she and beer, sharp cheese and bagels, soooooooooooooooooo romantic! Hugs and blessngs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/30/2021 9:13:00 AM
What a wonderful day! Can just picture the scene, lovely rhyming poetry… Belle
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Date: 5/30/2021 7:29:00 AM
Lovely Victor. I can see two people walking the shore, picnicking on the beach, enjoying the sand, sea and surf. It would indeed be hard to leave. Great job here with wonderful imagery. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/30/2021 2:11:00 AM
Hi Victor The lovely photo complimented your poem very well. I enjoyed them both. Well done. Have a wonderful:-)Alexis
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Date: 5/29/2021 6:39:00 PM
I would so love to eat at that trattoria, :)
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Date: 5/29/2021 10:54:00 AM
An elegantly penned tale of of a perfect day spent roaming a lovely beach. Beautiful imagery! :)
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Date: 5/29/2021 9:08:00 AM
Wow! What a delightful read!
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Date: 5/29/2021 7:43:00 AM
Great couplet, right now that beach sounds good for rest and enjoy the sun and quiet.
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Date: 5/29/2021 6:24:00 AM
Nothing like a walk on the beach, Victor, add to it good food and a shell necklace, what more could one want! :)
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Date: 5/29/2021 4:51:00 AM
Lovely snack, a walk, seashells for necklaces, swimming, nice walk home...lovely imagery. Does my heart good. ~ Hugs, Kim
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Date: 5/29/2021 4:32:00 AM
A fine walk on the beach, Victor. Enjoyed the stroll with you on the seashore. Splendid images, as always.
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Date: 5/29/2021 3:42:00 AM
A romantic day at the beach, Wonderful write Victor
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Date: 5/29/2021 2:54:00 AM
WOW, this is the loveliest and nicest write I've read today; your well-chosen words create a pleasant song comparable to drum beats that soothe the soul, and the sense of your sandy golden beach and the tidal wave creates a whole landscape of tranquility and serenity. Blessings and regards dear Victor
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Date: 5/29/2021 1:58:00 AM
You convey a so serene feel in tune with a fulfilling wandering! The whole ambiance is calm and appeasing.. how I enjoyed reading what your poetic imagination has wonderfully weaved, Victor! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 5/29/2021 1:50:00 AM
Nothing beats a day at the beach, so relaxing in summer time. Tom
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