A Summer Couplet

Cool breeze blowing as the hawk hovers around,
Scared chicks scatter to hide,but no mother on ground.





CONTEST:"A summer Couplet" sponsored by Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 7, 2013 at 11:00 AM
loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda
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July 2, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Whoa!! To those chicks..Great unique work for the contest..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 2:59 PM
I liked this MORE because it was a different life view! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A  Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:25 PM
Olusegun. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Beautiful couplet here Olusegun.Congrats on the win.
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Oh dear........I hope those baby chicks find shelter...... This is nature and her fickle ways. What a great twist on Andrea's contest.......well done, and so unique!!
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on a great entry....Jake
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June 29, 2013 at 2:15 AM
Congrats. Gl
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June 29, 2013 at 12:39 AM
Hi, Olusegun, your couplet was sweet and unique. Congrats for your HM in my contest.
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