A Summer Couplet

Barbeques sizzle as spirits soar into the dazzling day.
Fun in the sun abounds as children ageless come out to play!


written 6/10/2013
for Andrea's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 10:58 AM
loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Reads like a fun day for all..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win...Sara
A  Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Deb. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Love this Deb.Congrats on your win !
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:30 PM
We are all children under the sun!! Love this !!! :)
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Deb, this is a natural for this contest. It's hard to separate kids from summer... Congrats... Jake
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 8:58 AM
this is a great one for the fourth of July too!! Congrats for your cute poem's win in my contest.
Wilderson Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 6:19 PM
Wonderful! It really gives the picture of summer!
Bauer Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 5:14 PM
nice one! it really evokes summer...
Sivey Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 4:53 PM
I really loved this exciting summer enhanced write my friend! You have portrayed the summer with this gorgeous poem! What a tremendous piece, such a positively enlightening poem, Great Work!!
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