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A Sudden Waterfall

From Silence to Mozart
Dancing like a Ballerina.....
Fire in the water!




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Placement: 7th; (December 2010)

Contest : Haiku (Flow of water)

Sponsor : ^Rick Parise

By:kashinath karmakar(13th Dec.2010)

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Michael Smith

September 9, 2012 at 11:28 AM

I'm not big fan if haikus. You can read it in my new poem.(I had to get a plug in there). This has to be one of the best I've read in awhile. The first line not only brilliant but sets the tone for the whole piece.

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2011 at 1:02 AM

Back to this lovely one, and goodnight, Kash. I am sure up too late tonight!! Glad you liked that fairy tale type poem I worked so long on!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 19, 2010 at 8:22 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath-- different take on the contest but so true as well :) -- nikko :)

John Beam

December 17, 2010 at 6:04 PM

congrats and thank you i liked this exspecially with the title

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 17, 2010 at 8:30 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 17, 2010 at 8:07 AM

Go to your member page ... on the left.. under CONTESTS... click onto Contest Winners:Member and look for the Haiku contest sponsored by Rick Parise... I think it is toward bottom of first page of contest pages.. the list will appear and u can congratulate each winner individually Kashinath.. it is quite easy once u get used to the site..luv.. any help ask ..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

December 17, 2010 at 8:00 AM

I'm so happy to see your excellent, creative haiku in the winners' circle, Kashinath. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 17, 2010 at 7:27 AM

Congrats Kashinath on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend. .. enjoy with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2010 at 9:58 PM

I love this one. A very well deserved win . Congratulations!

Sharon Ruebel

December 16, 2010 at 2:42 PM

WOw Kashinath, This is a wonderful Haiku, so well done. I love it! Good luck in the contest As Always, Shar

Wilma Neels

December 16, 2010 at 6:49 AM

Kashinath, what brilliant imagery... Stunning entry for the contest.. All the best to you ;) Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

December 15, 2010 at 1:45 PM

Excellent way to write this one!!!! best wishes also to you in the contest...luv Michael

Eamon Duffin

December 15, 2010 at 11:47 AM

Hi Kashinath. Thank you for your kind words. You have captured the music in water superbly. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Carolyn Devonshire

December 15, 2010 at 10:05 AM

What an incredible image, Kashinath! I love your haiku. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 14, 2010 at 11:45 AM

Superb entry Kasinath.. and thankxxx for undoing the error of the block my friend.. have been wanting to comment on your work for two days now and realized it must be a mistake..the icons are so close together .. I have done it also to a good friend of mine and we laughed about it afterward.... great entry into the contest.. good luck and appreciate your many warm and always welcome comments on my poetry ..with luv..

Fabiyas M V

December 14, 2010 at 9:23 AM

I am doing a favour for Linda,Kashinath.She is unable to comment on your work.She asks if you have blocked her.Pls check it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 14, 2010 at 9:07 AM

Excellent entry into the contest for Flowing Water ... Kashinath.. good luck and thankxx for your many comments so warm and welcome on my poetry with luv..