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A Sudden Waterfall

From Silence to Mozart Dancing like a Ballerina..... Fire in the water! ================= Placement: 7th; (December 2010) Contest : Haiku (Flow of water) Sponsor : ^Rick Parise By:kashinath karmakar(13th Dec.2010)

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Michael Smith

Date: 9/9/2012 11:28:00 AM

I'm not big fan if haikus. You can read it in my new poem.(I had to get a plug in there). This has to be one of the best I've read in awhile. The first line not only brilliant but sets the tone for the whole piece.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2011 1:02:00 AM

Back to this lovely one, and goodnight, Kash. I am sure up too late tonight!! Glad you liked that fairy tale type poem I worked so long on!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/19/2010 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath-- different take on the contest but so true as well :) -- nikko :)

John Beam

Date: 12/17/2010 6:04:00 PM

congrats and thank you i liked this exspecially with the title

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 8:07:00 AM

Go to your member page ... on the left.. under CONTESTS... click onto Contest Winners:Member and look for the Haiku contest sponsored by Rick Parise... I think it is toward bottom of first page of contest pages.. the list will appear and u can congratulate each winner individually Kashinath.. it is quite easy once u get used to the site..luv.. any help ask ..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 8:00:00 AM

I'm so happy to see your excellent, creative haiku in the winners' circle, Kashinath. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 7:27:00 AM

Congrats Kashinath on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend. .. enjoy with luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 12/16/2010 9:59:00 PM

Very Nice!!!!!Congrats to you!!!!!!!!a winner indeed!!`God Bless You ~Rick~~~~~~SEE WINNER PAGE!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 9:58:00 PM

I love this one. A very well deserved win . Congratulations!

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/16/2010 2:42:00 PM

WOw Kashinath, This is a wonderful Haiku, so well done. I love it! Good luck in the contest As Always, Shar

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/16/2010 6:49:00 AM

Kashinath, what brilliant imagery... Stunning entry for the contest.. All the best to you ;) Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/15/2010 1:45:00 PM

Excellent way to write this one!!!! best wishes also to you in the contest...luv Michael

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/15/2010 11:47:00 AM

Hi Kashinath. Thank you for your kind words. You have captured the music in water superbly. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/15/2010 10:05:00 AM

What an incredible image, Kashinath! I love your haiku. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 11:45:00 AM

Superb entry Kasinath.. and thankxxx for undoing the error of the block my friend.. have been wanting to comment on your work for two days now and realized it must be a mistake..the icons are so close together .. I have done it also to a good friend of mine and we laughed about it afterward.... great entry into the contest.. good luck and appreciate your many warm and always welcome comments on my poetry ..with luv..

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/14/2010 9:23:00 AM

I am doing a favour for Linda,Kashinath.She is unable to comment on your work.She asks if you have blocked her.Pls check it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 9:07:00 AM

Excellent entry into the contest for Flowing Water ... Kashinath.. good luck and thankxx for your many comments so warm and welcome on my poetry with luv..

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/14/2010 9:00:00 AM

Beautiful depiction,Kashinath.A nice haiku

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/13/2010 4:32:00 PM

Very apt images you have penned to the theme of waterfall, Kashinath.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2010 2:21:00 PM

Great one ..Good luck in the contest..Sara