A Sudden Loss

How can a day start off normal
With the mundane usual things,
Almost predictable, daily tasks and trips
Life's general happenings?

Then someone you love hugs you goodbye,
"I'll see you soon my dears..."
How much longer would we have held that embrace
If we knew it was the last for years?

The last time they told you how tired they were,
Would you have found a new way to convey
Your sympathy and care, not just rubbing their back
And saying you're sorry they felt this way?

When you're taught that we know not
What tomorrow will bring and our life is but a mist,
You don't imagine a light on a life will go out
So sudden. So quick! So greatly missed!

Naively we expect a warning or sign
That our special loved one will go.
And those left behind would prepare heart and mind
For the grief, pain and sorrow to follow.

But that day began like many before.
Yet a hard hitting truth we would learn.
One day we each will walk through a door
And sadly, we will not return.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 8:08 PM
What a powerful yet sad write. We never know what each new day will bring. I know when that call comes in, our life will be changed forever. l am so sorry for your loss. I will add you to my Soup prayer list. May you be very blessed..............
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March 23, 2025 at 2:08 AM
Hi Paula. Thank you for your warm thoughts. It seems to take longer to get your head around it when it's sudden. She had another ten years in her at least, so we thought xx hoping you are keeping well. Warm wishes xx
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March 22, 2025 at 2:09 PM
Oh Natasha….what a powerfully sad write….l am so sorry for your unexpected loss and the sorrow you are going through. Take care ….big cuddle….Debx
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March 22, 2025 at 2:15 PM
Thank you for your kind words Debbie. This happened 6months ago now and it has been difficult writing poetry since. It's been emotionally numbing for me personally. But it's an important topic for people to be able to express in some way and poetry soup allows us all the room to do so and hopefully help others too who don't know how to express their experience of situations. My writes are usually more lighthearted but sometimes it's good to express the rawness of things too. Many warm wishes.
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