A Sudden Jolt

Wednesday, February 21, 2018
Ramzan Karim, Darjeeling.
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A sudden jolt

This is a tale about a cluster of hopes and burgeoning despair
Tossing and toasting flinging blankets
Wiping rolling down tears with his sleeve 
Countless hours flew by this wakeful stormy night
She has been ill lying in hospital for days and days
Dying or still has few more breaths
Brings her sweet face before his eyes
Ever caring, faithful, innocent and simple
The tenderness and warmth of her hug
He always began his day 
With greeting of her sweet smile and a hot bed tea 
Her hands always busy tiding his household
Without a grumble or gripe
Shared his grief and sorrow as if her own
Shouldered braved the fate’s storm
Today lying in her bed helpless ignored
Withdrawn and far from the warmth of his embrace
Parting still without remorse or guilt ;
He frowns, sulks, struggles juggling his mind
Perspiring, breathing heavily 
For days he is dreaming 
Waiting for that eventual day
Will that pretty girl with dashing personality, he met in the mall?
Accepts his proposition after She is dead ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/22/2024 6:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/1/2018 12:56:00 PM
This is a unique, definitely thought-provoking poem, Ramzan. I have read it twice,and there are so many interesting facets to it. Thank you for sharing. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Ramzan Karim
Date: 8/20/2018 11:59:00 AM
Hi Caren, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your sweet comment. I apologize for the delay in responding to your sincere comment.
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