A Strong Warrior

I was given a warrior's name,
comparing myself with saints,
presidents, painters, and princes...
all of whom have known grace.

The name Andrew means manly:
a strong and masculine image
standing out in this eccentric age...
when men are losing their identity.

A strong warrior as my ancestors were...
someone who has the boldest spirit
to fight until he sees a definitive defeat,
otherwise, his strength will increase in dare.

This name is the essence of a dedicated living:
two tireless arms holding up the pillars of my temple;
it will change its appearance, but it will never tumble:
to remind others that nothing is lost in persisting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mishra Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Not only have you conveyed the meaning of your name but also expressed a powerful message Andrew. Visiting this muse of yours has also given me a glimpse into the thoughtful contests that the late poet Linda-Marie used to organize. A beautiful coincidence for me. Congratulations on your win! Blessings :)
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July 14, 2020 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Crisci Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 9:49 AM
Thank you for my placement in your contest. It's a thrill to be a winner after having been away for so long. The pandemic has changed my life drastically as it has changed the lives of many. I'm very happy to make a comeback to PoetrySoup. I have missed posting my poetry and entering the contests. I wish you all the best. Enjoy your day and stay safe with your loved ones. Warm Regards, Andrew.
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March 6, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Glad to know the meaning of your name Andrew!Congrats on your win!--kashinath
Brown Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 2:05 PM
I loved how this built up to that last wondeful stanza, and of course you know I am VERY imprartial to the masculine version of my own name!!
Mehta Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Linda, Andrew
Sweetheart Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 9:43 AM
Congrats Andrew on your success in my contest What's in a Name with this superb entry luv.. thankxx for supporting my contests...
Wegenast Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 3:55 PM
Very well done, great job!
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