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A Strawberry Moon

in mute amazement
beauty hangs in June night sky ~
a strawberry moon



Fresh Traditional Haiku (5-7-5) Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by JCB Burl 
Date written: 06/03/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Carber Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 10:22 AM
Lovely Edward--congrats on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Thank you so much, L.J.:-)
Brul Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Beautifully painted! Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much, JCB:-)
Allison Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 4:34 PM
love the imagery and the image - so beautiful Edward, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Thank you very much, Jan:-)
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 11:42 AM
Thanks again, Aditi:-) Have a blessed day, my friend!
A   Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 6:19 PM
hello, Edward the beauty of a haiku is easy to admire. However the imagery here goes a long way. I'm hoping to see one in my life time. Enjoyed reading, thank you for reminding of the goodness I left behind here. I'm slowly trying to return. Always LINDA
Ibeh Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 9:19 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comments and visit, Linda:-) I missed you and I'm looking forward to your future poems!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 6:04 PM
Hello Edward, the strawberry moon is beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Hello Edward, i have never seen a strawberry moon. just the photo from above. Beautiful. Enjoy your evening my fiend.
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 6:28 PM
True indeed! I can't wait to see one this month! Have nice evening, too, Darlene:-)
Mishra Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Wow! Strawberry moon is such a different imagery Edward. Beauty in such few words. Best wishes for the contest :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:39 PM
Thank you very much, Aditi:-) Glad you liked it.
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