A Story of Fish and Men

Just prior to the dawn
Stillness clung to the pond
When sounds of the wild resound

Every sense was cast
Upon water of glass
For no fish sought to be found

Rewarded with a bite
Bass in a mood to fight
A fish with girth to astound


From the water it jumped
Then wrapped around a stump
My line now tattered and frayed 

"Maneuver the canoe"
and "guide the fish to you"
I know how the game is played

I grabbed it by the lip
Vessel began to tip
The aquatics won the day


Water rippled and rough
Swam to gather my stuff
The water murky and cold

Towed all my things to shore
body beaten and sore
Looked to the east to behold

Wiped the drops from my eyes
and gazed with some surprise
At a pond now bathed in gold.


The rays replenished hope
Gave me the will to cope
So I shoved off once again

All the rest of the day
Tackle was stowed away
Adrift in a state of Zen

Absorbing sights and sounds
Lost in all that surrounds
A story of fish and men
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 9:16 PM
Congratulations Joe. Exquisite piece!
Kendrick Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
Maverick Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 3:29 PM
Enjoyed this relaxed story Joe, good to see the resultant winning..'
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations Joe xx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 8:18 AM
This is so well done, congrats, loved the story especially the first six stanza's
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 7:43 PM
Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Joe
Mac Donald Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 6:38 PM
You nailed it with this one, Joe! Maybe something that people mightl fail to appreciate...those quiet moments of 'Zen'. This makes me feel quiet and respectful, thank you! Keep well....Mikki
Fisher Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 4:12 PM
Liked your story about fish and men, with a little zen.
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 4:28 AM
Thanks for the entry, Joe
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