A Stormy Night

A stormy night,
Wild winds and thunder bolts
Jolt the tin-shed homes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 14, 2011 at 9:45 AM
a good visual of a stormy night, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.
Amadore Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 8:17 AM
A well-drawn picture in a few words, with socially important referents...I would add one syllable to the second line (to total the seven usually required of haiku...) Good work!
Mehta Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 7:15 AM
I can see clearly the visual with images you have created with words, Asif
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