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A Stitch In Rhyme

A quilt is a poem that’s been crafted With stitches that cleverly mime The words that a poet has drafted In manner and rhythm and rhyme. For in piecing a pattern together, Every section, once stark and alone, Must be seamlessly tailored to tether It to others when carefully sewn Just like adjectives, verbs and conjunctions Plus the other unnamed parts of speech Let the writer arrange, so their functions Form the meanings that readers can reach. When the final thread’s snipped from the needle And the pencil has made its last mark, Neither quilter nor poet need wheedle For responses their efforts should spark.

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Date: 4/28/2023 1:29:00 PM
I'm with all the other commenters 100%, Ilene. I know that poems are crafted, but I have never associated that with quilting. An excellent analogy.
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Date: 4/26/2023 5:42:00 AM
I love it, Ilene! If you make quilts that resemble your poems, then they are definitely ones to be proud of! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/24/2023 10:24:00 AM
I have enjoyed how you correlated sewing and quilting with constructing poetry.
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Date: 4/23/2023 11:10:00 PM
Oooo, this is great! I really like the analogy with sewing a quilt. Lovely write :)
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Date: 4/23/2023 10:44:00 PM
And when your finished it I bet you go back and look at it a dozen times before you pit it away. What a lovely inspiring poem Ilene Thank you .
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Date: 4/23/2023 7:10:00 PM
Great advice and your poems always rhyme and flow flawlessly, Ilene. that drive for perfection can quickly become an unquenchable obsession.
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Date: 4/23/2023 10:24:00 AM
Excellent! Though only an advanced beginner, I’ve made a couple quilts and crafted many more poems. Enjoyed this, Ilene!
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