A Stitch In Rhyme

A quilt is a poem that’s been crafted
With stitches that cleverly mime
The words that a poet has drafted
In manner and rhythm and rhyme.

For in piecing a pattern together,
Every section, once stark and alone,
Must be seamlessly tailored to tether
It to others when carefully sewn

Just like adjectives, verbs and conjunctions
Plus the other unnamed parts of speech
Let the writer arrange, so their functions
Form the meanings that readers can reach.

When the final thread’s snipped from the needle
And the pencil has made its last mark,
Neither quilter nor poet need wheedle
For responses their efforts should spark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Slaughter Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 1:29 PM
I'm with all the other commenters 100%, Ilene. I know that poems are crafted, but I have never associated that with quilting. An excellent analogy.
Callus Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 5:42 AM
I love it, Ilene! If you make quilts that resemble your poems, then they are definitely ones to be proud of! ~ Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 10:24 AM
I have enjoyed how you correlated sewing and quilting with constructing poetry.
Draper Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 11:10 PM
Oooo, this is great! I really like the analogy with sewing a quilt. Lovely write :)
Volumes Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 10:44 PM
And when your finished it I bet you go back and look at it a dozen times before you pit it away. What a lovely inspiring poem Ilene Thank you .
Turner Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Great advice and your poems always rhyme and flow flawlessly, Ilene. that drive for perfection can quickly become an unquenchable obsession.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Excellent! Though only an advanced beginner, I’ve made a couple quilts and crafted many more poems. Enjoyed this, Ilene!
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