Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

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A Steep Descent of a Small River

Once I tried 
to embrace a cascade
A steep descent of a slim river

With a soft
regalia of steps
but she sprinkled scantily on me

But I was 
aroused, flushed and reddened.
Enjoying her warm and soft impact

Before she
became a cataract
with strong undercurrents and deep holes.

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October 31, 2014
Form: Parallelogram de Crystalline 
Dr.Ram Mehta 
Fifth Place Win
Contest: some form of crystalline by nette onclaud

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Connie Marcum Wong November 9, 2014 at 4:26 AM Wow, sounds thrilling but dangerous Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win!

Paul Callus November 8, 2014 at 3:08 PM Attracted by the change from gentleness to rough strength...alluring beauty that could be misleading! Congrats on a very deserved win, Dr. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode November 8, 2014 at 8:33 AM Congrats Dr,there is time for everything;time to swim and time to come out. Pretty well.

Brenda Meier-Hans November 8, 2014 at 8:07 AM Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Richard Lamoureux November 7, 2014 at 12:48 PM Bravo Dr. Ram!

Nette Onclaud November 7, 2014 at 2:08 AM the transformation from soft to fierce images delight, dr.ram...thank you for being part of my contest with my sweet congrats! Dr.Ram Mehta November 8, 2014 at 4:39 AM Thanks, nette

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2014 at 9:58 PM such unusual and interesting images,Dr. Ram. Very nicely done. Congrats for your win.

Debra Squyres November 6, 2014 at 9:31 PM Dropping back by to extend congratulations to you for your placement in the contest !!

Maurice Yvonne November 6, 2014 at 6:54 PM Wow, I love this poem. Great Write. Comgratulations on your win.

Jan Allison November 6, 2014 at 3:27 PM beautifully penned many congrats on your win Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton November 2, 2014 at 4:41 AM I can just picture this Ram hope it was a warm day lol. gl in contest hugs

Debra Squyres October 31, 2014 at 3:44 PM Loving the takes on this theme and used form and this one is no exception. Deeply moving !!