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Once I tried to embrace a cascade A steep descent of a slim river With a soft regalia of steps but she sprinkled scantily on me But I was aroused, flushed and reddened. Enjoying her warm and soft impact Before she became a cataract with strong undercurrents and deep holes.
+++ October 31, 2014 Form: Parallelogram de Crystalline Dr.Ram Mehta Fifth Place Win Contest: some form of crystalline by nette onclaud

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Date: 11/9/2014 4:26:00 AM
Wow, sounds thrilling but dangerous Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/8/2014 3:08:00 PM
Attracted by the change from gentleness to rough strength...alluring beauty that could be misleading! Congrats on a very deserved win, Dr. // paul
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Date: 11/8/2014 8:33:00 AM
Congrats Dr,there is time for everything;time to swim and time to come out. Pretty well.
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Date: 11/8/2014 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 11/7/2014 12:48:00 PM
Bravo Dr. Ram!
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Date: 11/7/2014 2:08:00 AM
the transformation from soft to fierce images delight, dr.ram...thank you for being part of my contest with my sweet congrats!
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:39:00 AM
Thanks, nette
Date: 11/6/2014 9:58:00 PM
such unusual and interesting images,Dr. Ram. Very nicely done. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:31:00 PM
Dropping back by to extend congratulations to you for your placement in the contest !!
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:54:00 PM
Wow, I love this poem. Great Write. Comgratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/6/2014 3:27:00 PM
beautifully penned many congrats on your win Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2014 4:41:00 AM
I can just picture this Ram hope it was a warm day lol. gl in contest hugs
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Date: 10/31/2014 3:44:00 PM
Loving the takes on this theme and used form and this one is no exception. Deeply moving !!
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