A Star's Heartbeat

I watch her in the sky shining like a diamond chit splashing her light around in the midnight sombre she is more beautiful then all other things that orbit this star, she's an insight to our inner world order and a heartbeat pulse, I've never known to quit Watch how she tails her glow above your head reminding you of halos, sunrises and auric sheens She's a polished scintillant, never to be misread a navigator in full throttle a beauteous inbred even Captains of the sea want her on their team I remember when I was little me and my daddy In the backdrop of summer, standing on a balcony He pointed a finger and taught me about star poetry I never could have met STARS without his guiding light So when he died, I quietly sent him out into the night. 3/19/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Raven Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 7:24 PM
Hi Pixie, this is such a wonderful write, you bring the blessed stars to life with such beautiful words. You give my vision's life. This is a beautiful write that comes from the heart. It is a most definite fav, Pixie. Your poetry touches deeply. Hugs....Mike. XX
Krutsinger Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 8:38 PM
Exquisitely done, it rivals the beauty of the milky way Pixie Dust.
Smith Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 12:56 PM
This is truly lovely Pixie, so well done...
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