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A Starry Finish Line...

what will your heaven be?
with who will it be shared?
I promise you will see
who really cared
a sunrise or sunset?
an ocean or field?
friends you have met
is fate made or sealed?
will it be on a starry ground?
or maybe a moonlit conversation?
simple happiness will be found
along with your final destination
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ginn Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 9:19 PM
What a soft sweet contemplation. I want mine to be full of trees and hills, smiles and thankful hearts
Goff Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 6:58 AM
love the great title! and wistful poem! Luke, thanks for comments, the redwinged blackbird is my favorite plaintive tune too! I sat overlooking a swamp near my house and listened to their calls all afternoon yest.! Best! Jim
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