A Standstill

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creamiest bouquet white daisies touched by red sun in aged day's glow marvelous mauve walls tell stories of sun's passing birds whistle blithely glass lake reveals moon that's peeping at the window raising dark drama plum shadows, fireflies pink sun's travels never cease blue butterflies sleep

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/12/2024 3:59:00 PM

Each night seems to rise in special colors of its own. I enjoy light breezy nights on a porch.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/12/2024 11:07:00 PM

The porch is a wonderful place to watch the sunset. Thank you for your lovely remarks. :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 7/5/2024 9:58:00 PM

Dear Evelyn, love all of these haiku’s. The imagery and skilled use of colour is exquisite as always from you. I love to read your poems as the scenes play out so beautifully in the mind with your delicate descriptions. ‘ white daisies touched by red sun’ glass lake reveals moon’’ pink sun travels’ absolutely gorgeous! Such a delight to read my sweet friend. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and smiles xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/5/2024 11:11:00 PM

Your warm words have tinged my day with happiness, dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. I hope your weekend is wonderful. Blessings and hugs. xx :)