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A Stance

When I stand too near
My vision isn't clear

When I stand away
My vision is clear as day

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/21/2021 9:08:00 AM

So apt. Guess you need glasses for reading, Shirley. My vision is the other way around.

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 4/22/2021 9:16:00 PM

I do, Milton. I think it would be more of a nuisance to be short sighted as glasses would have to be worn all the time. Did you ever watch the Mr Magoo cartoons....

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/21/2021 7:35:00 AM

True dat! Great write.xomo

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 4/22/2021 5:16:00 PM

Thank you for dat lovely comment.