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A Spirit, a Mind

See inside an eye not in plain vision another plane behind
Change vision not another aimless high
Painless goodbyes never satisfied
A brain amplified
Anger inside lives a stranger hard to find
In the mirror hard to feel but exists
Children advent when they vent to this
Sick sense
A third set of prints not recognized
Word mechanized to move forward 
A mind tries torture no reply try another server
Wifi mind in the sky a brainstorming
Original family found out of all the orphans
Don’t know what I feel inside my brains my only organ
I’m a vessel, lost horseman
This is what you got from a crossed circuit 
The spirit makes it hard to walk as a person
Hawk in a field of horses
The sky is the only window to see inside all the torment
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 10, 2011 at 5:08 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jourdan. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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