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A Spinning Gem

lapis lazuli
a gem spinning in the sky
a whisper of clouds

Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2014

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March 12, 2017 at 5:13 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fine piece!

July 9, 2014 at 7:52 PM

Congrad's on your win Light & Love

July 9, 2014 at 7:48 PM

This is a gem my friend...congrats

July 9, 2014 at 7:41 PM

Ooh pretty :) love the image, grats on your win :)

Mark J. Halliday

July 9, 2014 at 3:03 AM

Very nice; I would have rated it higher. Congrats.

July 8, 2014 at 8:24 PM

congrats on a beautiful win, Joseph, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

July 8, 2014 at 5:27 PM

Gorgeous...my favorite so far as I work down the list. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

July 8, 2014 at 3:40 PM

for me, this the best one I have seen on the list yet. It's amazingly beautiful. Congrats.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 11:18 AM

This is so beautiful - no wonder it is on the winners' list! Congratulations on a well-deserved win!

July 8, 2014 at 9:45 AM

Lovely haiku where bluish imagery invades the mind. Congrats on a merited win, Joseph! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 8, 2014 at 2:13 AM

Tremendous write Joseph ,, congrats on huge win!

July 8, 2014 at 12:17 AM

Lovely images , Joseph and congrats on the win

Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2014 at 9:31 PM

Sweet win...PD

July 7, 2014 at 9:12 PM

Joseph, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

May 22, 2014 at 10:46 PM

wow, this is very pretty and I like how the third line is a little different and yet goes along with the picture.

May 22, 2014 at 12:28 AM

Stunning haiku. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

May 21, 2014 at 7:34 PM

Joseph, wow..awesome haiku...Linda

May 21, 2014 at 3:30 PM

Beautiful visual Joseph - Have to admit, I had to google the first line :)

May 21, 2014 at 3:18 PM

Saw the glow of moving color as soon as I read it my friend... Very nice one!!

May 21, 2014 at 2:29 PM

very effective haiku... thanks for sharin./. :O))

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 21, 2014 at 2:23 PM

- A beautiful picture - thank you, Joseph ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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