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Poetic Form: Senryu

Inspired: 2024 July 19

Image: Countup of the Human Race

Kako se prave bebe-ko ih donosi??Doso sam da pitam tebe,ma hajde reci mi:)) | Niš

everyone is born with a death sentence and the penalty is life everyone is born with a life sentence and the penalty is death

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2024 8:44:00 AM

Wow…love the contrast and yet the similarity! Knowing I shall see the Lord on the otherside is comforting for he paid the wages of my sin and redeemed my life. Moreso, I have a great inheritance in heaven. How can I not praise the one who saved me. Hugs ~ Kim

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/19/2024 9:57:00 AM

Amen, Kim, scriptures breathes well with thee, for in full agreement I am, one mind and one accord, we will meet again, Aloha William