A Spider's Hunt

The spider sits upon his web
casting snares with each little thread
“Come play, come play with me” he said.
“A simple game to play, called Ebb.”

“No, no, no,” said the zooming fly.
“It’s clear that you are a bad guy.”

“I won’t play,” said a mottled moth.
“I won’t go near your sticky cloth.”

“I’m much too busy,” said the ant.
“I’d love to play, but I just can’t.”

The spider sits upon his weave,
cleaning up after a stray leaf,
and says in quiet disbelief,
“I’m not as bad as you believe.”

“No, you’re not,” agrees a song bird.
“You agree?” as threads were secured.
“No worse than I am,” he assured.
The spider’s response is unheard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Gotta love those spider's ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Poem Not Entered in a contest" Brittany. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 4:35 PM
hahaha, this is really cool. I love how the spider meets his match at the end. really enjoyed this. Congrats on your win.
May Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 3:17 PM
congrats on your win Britany
Ober Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Excellent poem!! Congrats on the win :)
Gasun Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Many congratulations on your awesome win Brittany! hugs, Leonora
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November 13, 2012 at 12:22 AM
Congratulations on your win Brittany, well done, I hate spiders xx
Merryman Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 8:17 PM
Brittany this is such a cute and clever write! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 5:45 PM
CONGRATS BRITTANY ON ANOTHER BRILLIANT WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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November 12, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Brittany, congratulations in Susan's contest... xox~pd
Poet Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 8:09 AM
A great write here!Congrats on your win in the contest.
Palmer Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 8:22 PM
lunch is served lol,great write Brittany
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Very sad for the poor little spider. Very well spun tale. Pun intended.
Smith Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 10:51 AM
Great Poem!
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November 1, 2012 at 12:12 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes, Larisa
Montella Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 10:44 PM
This is great.
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