John Freeman Poet Rhyme

"a Special Note"

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Thirty five years ago…I wrote my goat a special note......................................(Matt. 25;32)
You logic will not float…in Love’s special moat..
 
Love will not lead…the mind’s parasitic seed..
For the mind constantly bleeds..love, the parent seed..

A parasitic seed….promots not God speed..
`Tis derivative of carnality’s greed…carnal needs… bleed…love seed..

Christ..the ultimate simplicity… removes complexity, world’s toxicities..
Free will… `Tis goat’s choice to fill…but know this, love only fills, God’s will

One reality…love’s thrill..`Tis  the real deal..
The white stones…stand alone…near God’s throne..

 Of white stones….a city built…will not tilt…..................................(Rev. 2:17)&(Rev. 3:12)
No leaning tower…hath any power…

My special note..wrote..love is like a mote..
Within…life’s city floats…no goat shall float..love’s mote..

The stream…the River of Life….the sacrifice..
Flows out of the City of Life…unto the mind of strife…..................................(Rev. 22:1-11)

Love in the mind abated…from the City…mind is separated…
But never fear…Love will be near… To all of humanity dear..

Densities of carnality…will clear….from the mind…is clear..
As Life’s River flows clear…very near…minds will grow clear..

`Tis from the city…the sheep shall see…for a part of the city…they shall be..
As the City’s life flows out to the sea….the goats shall began to see..
By the light of  City…for they are the sea!!

12-2-09 johnmosesfreeman

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Lynette Chachere February 20, 2010 at 2:27 AM Lovely write(: i love the form. keep at it. -Always&Forever Lynette

Mercedes Jordan December 30, 2009 at 12:15 PM amazing

Lena Townsend December 16, 2009 at 10:09 AM You have paid much honor to the Lord with this write. He must be smilig down as he looks upon you with the knowing that you truly feel, live, and believe His word. You write with so much conviction. Your words truly burn like the fire of Spirit as they touch the souls of those of us that need the reminder of His love, especially this time of year. It is so hard for many to see it on a daily basis but His love can see them through if they seek Him fully. Beautifully penned. Smiles from Lolita

James Faulkner December 14, 2009 at 12:47 PM very well pennned. love and peace: james

Jayne Eggins December 9, 2009 at 10:10 PM Another wonderful write moses ... and thank you kindly for the wonderful messages you left on my poems ... love Jayne

Sue Mason December 8, 2009 at 6:42 AM Excellent write here, John. Hope you have a great holiday and that 2010 is a special year for you and those you love.

Sara Kendrick December 6, 2009 at 12:40 PM Last stanza don't get the goats unless you mean that sea are the unsaved. Keep writing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 6, 2009 at 9:39 AM thankxxx Moses for your wonderful inspirational comments on my poetry.. read Rise and Shine for a Sunday boost... as your poems always give me one... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire December 5, 2009 at 10:36 PM As one who enjoys co-writing with you, I must tell you how much your faith has inspired me in the past few months I've been reading your work. I'm so thankful to have made such a friend who is an unyielding source of spiritual sense. You are unique, eloquent and truly a remarkable writer, Moses! Much love, Carolyn

Colleen Bono December 5, 2009 at 5:54 PM I posted a christmas poem.

Charmaine Chircop December 5, 2009 at 11:58 AM Truely Outstandind are your verses,It seems you are ispired by God all the time..and you are an inspiration to us all my friend--You are the fine salt of the soup ,,Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 5, 2009 at 8:50 AM thankxxx Moses for your inspiring comments on my poetry .. if u want a "pick me up" for your day read Cheer for Poetry.. if u want some faith reinforcement read Promises... its all good... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Caroline Cécile Delacroix December 4, 2009 at 8:56 PM Interesting poem, Moses, as always. And yes, love is what will remain and it is God's will. Thank you for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Colleen Bono December 4, 2009 at 1:38 PM This one is really nice.Soon I will be able to write different forms of poetry besides my boring one's.Right now I am on valium and tylenol with codiene so I am having trouble thinking straight but I won't give up.

Jesu Johnson December 4, 2009 at 12:43 PM THIS IS A ENLIGHTING PIECE>>> THANKS FOR POSTING IT!!!!

Brian Strand December 3, 2009 at 12:43 AM Such and inventive mind John.You make this genre your own.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today

Marty Owens December 2, 2009 at 10:21 PM Wonderful...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty

Charmaine Chircop December 2, 2009 at 9:32 PM You really wrote your goat something so powerful,love the message of the unity between the sea and the city,,the goats and the sheep..Well done city sheep.. for lightening the sea goats..good job indeed..all about love..Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 2, 2009 at 4:55 PM Powerful, intense, thought provoking, immense, soul searching poetry tonight Moses.. Christ the ultimate simplicity removes complexity worlds' toxicities .. free will tis goat's choice to fill but know this love only fills God's will.. I am in awe of these words... such a gift to share with us.. excellent, beautiful, wonderful write.. blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie"Sweetheart" and thankxxx for your loving comments on my poetry also..

Jared Pickett December 2, 2009 at 11:37 AM Outstanding write here friend.... Very uplifting.....Great work.....:JP]