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"a Special Note"

Free Verse Rhyme Thirty five years ago…I wrote my goat a special note......................................(Matt. 25;32) You logic will not float…in Love’s special moat.. Love will not lead…the mind’s parasitic seed.. For the mind constantly bleeds..love, the parent seed.. A parasitic seed….promots not God speed.. `Tis derivative of carnality’s greed…carnal needs… bleed…love seed.. Christ..the ultimate simplicity… removes complexity, world’s toxicities.. Free will… `Tis goat’s choice to fill…but know this, love only fills, God’s will One reality…love’s thrill..`Tis the real deal.. The white stones…stand alone…near God’s throne.. Of white stones….a city built…will not tilt…..................................(Rev. 2:17)&(Rev. 3:12) No leaning tower…hath any power… My special note..wrote..love is like a mote.. Within…life’s city floats…no goat shall float..love’s mote.. The stream…the River of Life….the sacrifice.. Flows out of the City of Life…unto the mind of strife…..................................(Rev. 22:1-11) Love in the mind abated…from the City…mind is separated… But never fear…Love will be near… To all of humanity dear.. Densities of carnality…will clear….from the mind…is clear.. As Life’s River flows clear…very near…minds will grow clear.. `Tis from the city…the sheep shall see…for a part of the city…they shall be.. As the City’s life flows out to the sea….the goats shall began to see.. By the light of City…for they are the sea!! 12-2-09 johnmosesfreeman

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Date: 2/20/2010 2:27:00 AM
Lovely write(: i love the form. keep at it. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/30/2009 12:15:00 PM
amazing
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Date: 12/16/2009 10:09:00 AM
You have paid much honor to the Lord with this write. He must be smilig down as he looks upon you with the knowing that you truly feel, live, and believe His word. You write with so much conviction. Your words truly burn like the fire of Spirit as they touch the souls of those of us that need the reminder of His love, especially this time of year. It is so hard for many to see it on a daily basis but His love can see them through if they seek Him fully. Beautifully penned. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 12/14/2009 12:47:00 PM
very well pennned. love and peace: james
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Date: 12/9/2009 10:10:00 PM
Another wonderful write moses ... and thank you kindly for the wonderful messages you left on my poems ... love Jayne
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:42:00 AM
Excellent write here, John. Hope you have a great holiday and that 2010 is a special year for you and those you love.
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Date: 12/6/2009 12:40:00 PM
Last stanza don't get the goats unless you mean that sea are the unsaved. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 12/6/2009 9:39:00 AM
thankxxx Moses for your wonderful inspirational comments on my poetry.. read Rise and Shine for a Sunday boost... as your poems always give me one... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/5/2009 10:36:00 PM
As one who enjoys co-writing with you, I must tell you how much your faith has inspired me in the past few months I've been reading your work. I'm so thankful to have made such a friend who is an unyielding source of spiritual sense. You are unique, eloquent and truly a remarkable writer, Moses! Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/5/2009 5:54:00 PM
I posted a christmas poem.
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Date: 12/5/2009 11:58:00 AM
Truely Outstandind are your verses,It seems you are ispired by God all the time..and you are an inspiration to us all my friend--You are the fine salt of the soup ,,Charma
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Date: 12/5/2009 8:50:00 AM
thankxxx Moses for your inspiring comments on my poetry .. if u want a "pick me up" for your day read Cheer for Poetry.. if u want some faith reinforcement read Promises... its all good... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:56:00 PM
Interesting poem, Moses, as always. And yes, love is what will remain and it is God's will. Thank you for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.
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Date: 12/4/2009 1:38:00 PM
This one is really nice.Soon I will be able to write different forms of poetry besides my boring one's.Right now I am on valium and tylenol with codiene so I am having trouble thinking straight but I won't give up.
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Date: 12/4/2009 12:43:00 PM
THIS IS A ENLIGHTING PIECE>>> THANKS FOR POSTING IT!!!!
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:43:00 AM
Such and inventive mind John.You make this genre your own.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today
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Date: 12/2/2009 10:21:00 PM
Wonderful...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 12/2/2009 9:32:00 PM
You really wrote your goat something so powerful,love the message of the unity between the sea and the city,,the goats and the sheep..Well done city sheep.. for lightening the sea goats..good job indeed..all about love..Charma
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:55:00 PM
Powerful, intense, thought provoking, immense, soul searching poetry tonight Moses.. Christ the ultimate simplicity removes complexity worlds' toxicities .. free will tis goat's choice to fill but know this love only fills God's will.. I am in awe of these words... such a gift to share with us.. excellent, beautiful, wonderful write.. blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie"Sweetheart" and thankxxx for your loving comments on my poetry also..
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Date: 12/2/2009 11:37:00 AM
Outstanding write here friend.... Very uplifting.....Great work.....:JP]
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