A Special Memory

A special memory


Still remember the memorable day,
When happiness was on my way,

I was anticipating confirmation of our meet,
Passion was eager to warmly greet,

Legs were trembling in great trepidation,
Heart beats getting faster in succession,

And eventually close as he reached,
Subtler emotions desperately beseeched,

Having lost in an intimate embrace,
Unaware of the time and place,

Apprehensions culminated into serenity,
Special instant of time is a pinprick of eternity !


Written September 17th, 2014
For contest 'A special memory' by Regina Riddle

Awarded 5th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 23, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Dr Upma,, Congratulations, In Regina's "Special Memory" contest..... Have a nice one, LINDA
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 4:39 PM
dropping back with congratulations Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
Guzzi Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 2:24 PM
Ahh great metaphor a 'pinprick of eternity!' Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 5:11 PM
beautifully penned memories
Callus Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 4:22 PM
What a lovely, special memory Upma! anticipation...trepidation...and loving serenity! Captivating final line! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Such a lovely poem Dr. Sharma. Congratulations on your win
Lindley Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 9:21 AM
Closing lines seal this magnificent write up tight. You just described my first meeting and embrace with my wife(then fiancée) at the airport in Cebu, Philippines ten years ago.. Just replace the word -he -- with -she- and it is a perfect description! I hope yours turned out as wells mine did..
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Lovely memories well expressed with emotions, Dr. Upma. congrats on the win
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 10:16 PM
I love that ,a pinprick of eternity. EXACTLY so. My most special memory is akin to this one!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 8:51 AM
:) lovely memory..:) like your last two couplets best..:)
Parker Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Caught in the moment,time stood still and now a cherished memory..
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 2:10 PM
A memory you will never forget and you have penned this event so well:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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