A Special Memory

A special memory


Still remember the memorable day,
When happiness was on my way,

I was anticipating confirmation of our meet,
Passion was eager to warmly greet,

Legs were trembling in great trepidation,
Heart beats getting faster in succession,

And eventually close as he reached,
Subtler emotions desperately beseeched,

Having lost in an intimate embrace,
Unaware of the time and place,

Apprehensions culminated into serenity,
Special instant of time is a pinprick of eternity !


Written September 17th, 2014
For contest 'A special memory' by Regina Riddle

Awarded 5th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/23/2014 4:58:00 PM
Dr Upma,, Congratulations, In Regina's "Special Memory" contest..... Have a nice one, LINDA
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Date: 9/22/2014 4:39:00 PM
dropping back with congratulations Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/22/2014 2:24:00 PM
Ahh great metaphor a 'pinprick of eternity!' Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/19/2014 5:11:00 PM
beautifully penned memories
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Date: 9/19/2014 4:22:00 PM
What a lovely, special memory Upma! anticipation...trepidation...and loving serenity! Captivating final line! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 9/19/2014 4:21:00 PM
Such a lovely poem Dr. Sharma. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/19/2014 9:21:00 AM
Closing lines seal this magnificent write up tight. You just described my first meeting and embrace with my wife(then fiancée) at the airport in Cebu, Philippines ten years ago.. Just replace the word -he -- with -she- and it is a perfect description! I hope yours turned out as wells mine did..
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Date: 9/19/2014 5:47:00 AM
Lovely memories well expressed with emotions, Dr. Upma. congrats on the win
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:16:00 PM
I love that ,a pinprick of eternity. EXACTLY so. My most special memory is akin to this one!
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Date: 9/18/2014 8:51:00 AM
:) lovely memory..:) like your last two couplets best..:)
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Date: 9/17/2014 6:50:00 PM
Caught in the moment,time stood still and now a cherished memory..
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Date: 9/17/2014 2:10:00 PM
A memory you will never forget and you have penned this event so well:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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