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A Special Doll


A special doll, so long ago,
	was my big gift when I turned eight.
		With legs that moved so perfectly;
I'd swing her arms, and she walked straight.

So real she looked: full two feet tall,
	brown curly hair and eyes of blue; 
		pink hat and coat over her dress
with patent shoes and lace socks too.

Ten years flew by, and she was stored
	in our home attic, late in June,
		for I had married, moved away-
yet knew I'd see her someday soon.

One year then passed. To my surprise,
	when visiting back home, a while
		she wasn't there- given away;
so hard for me to reconcile.

A grown-up mom I was by then,
	with a sweet baby of my own.
		But still, this special gift was gone-
my 'little girl heart' did bemoan,

she once was mine, but then was lost,
	donated to an old thrift store.
		This special gift, saved from my past-
held in my thoughts for evermore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Williams Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Heart touching poem! How lucky is the person upon finding your much-loved doll that day in the thrift shop. getting to make joyous memories, as you did for many years. Thank you for a lovely read, and congrats on your contest placement!
Williams Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 4:39 PM
Watson Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 10:48 AM
How lovely, Sandra. Your rhythm and rhyme are always spot on and the content was touching. I too had a favourite baby doll but like you, only memories remain.
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy! Hugs, Sandra
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