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A Special Christmas Gift

Leaving him alone to sleep, she gets up out of their bed; late night Christmas Eve, their first Christmas since they wed. Quiet as a church mouse she makes her way down the hall and over to the Christmas tree that stands against the wall. Standing there in her negligee in the silence all alone; being ever so still and careful not to make her presence known. She hangs on the tree the ornament she had been so careful to hide; the special ornament as a gift to him, a present from his bride. They didn’t have much money, as newlyweds seldom do; she couldn’t afford that special present, something fancy and new. She prayed that he would like this gift, she had crafted it herself from odds and ends in her studio she found sitting on the shelf. A special ornament for the tree to celebrate their new life; an ornament, specially made with love, to remind him of his wife. She decorated it so carefully, and inscribed it in plain view; “On this our first Christmas together, my darling I love you.”

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Date: 12/24/2017 9:37:00 AM
A very sweet and endearing write John! Merry Christmas!~Che :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2017 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Cheryl, Merry Christmas to you! John
Date: 12/23/2017 9:36:00 AM
Sooooooooooo sweet and delivered so well in flowing lines and rhyme. A very touching poem, John - you got me! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2017 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 12/23/2017 8:44:00 AM
Lovely with romance, John!
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2017 7:29:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 12/22/2017 8:17:00 PM
The romantic in your is showing, John. What a precious tale!
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/22/2017 10:02:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, i’ve been watching too many Halmark movies I guess. ;)
Date: 12/22/2017 12:01:00 PM
Awww. John! This is so very sweet! Made me all teary eyed. Garsh. Also, I took your advice and edited my woman to have a concrete man. Don't blush! You asked for it. Lol. Be careful what you wish for!
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/22/2017 12:15:00 PM
Thanks, Rhoda, I'm glad my poem moved you so much. And your revised concrete poem...be sure to see my comment.
Date: 12/21/2017 10:29:00 AM
Hi John, This is so beautiful and heart warming. It reminded of a Christmas movie I saw recently. Well done:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/21/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis, glad I was able to warm your heart :) John
Date: 12/21/2017 9:21:00 AM
aww John this is absolutely charming and such a touching poem:-) hugs jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/21/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Jan, I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was inspired by a very cute painting done by an artist friend; I would have asked permission to post it except the girl was in her thong underwear and not a nightgown...a bit too revealing. Merry Christmas to you and your family. John
Date: 12/21/2017 8:25:00 AM
oh how sweet! I make ornaments every year with my daughters pic on it for my family members. This is adorable and really rings true to the meaning of Christmas. So Sweet! :)-luloo
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/21/2017 9:16:00 AM
Luloo, thank you for the wonderful comments. We always made ornaments with our kids as well and we still hang many of them on our tree today. That's what makes Christmas so special and brings back many fond memories. Merry Christmas to you and your family!

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