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A Sparrows Bath

A sparrow sits on a branch so narrow Taken a bath as raindrops fall He shakes to the right he shakes to the left he shakes and shakes in front of all I smile each time he shakes his feathers A rainy day made the perfect weather For this little sparrow to bathe each feather

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/5/2019 5:25:00 PM
Friend who is fine feathered, Each storm he has weathered, And worn; Wing torn; Right or left has often veered, Jim Horn
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Date: 1/20/2019 9:36:00 AM
Sweet! I can see it! Wonderful imagery :) xomo
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Victoria Addino
Date: 1/23/2019 5:19:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 1/20/2019 8:31:00 AM
I can see this sparrow having fun, perfectly described Victoria.
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Victoria Addino
Date: 1/23/2019 5:21:00 PM
Thank You it’s nice when our feather friends make us smile

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