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A Sparkling Star

Faraway ambassador of light distant dream sailing ocean waves begging golden spear of destiny strikes midnight bells ring Spotlighting beautiful stunning to the eyes priceless gem diamond brightly sparks on a shining jewel treasure find Mystery shades gasping warm breathless smiles tides turn flutters the heart beating drum roars as the arrow strikes sexy moonlighting beauty Hot flushes sweeping deeply skipping flames on magic dust wishes warm touching inside the darkest night glowing thoughts Haunting full lips silver pearl whispers silently dancing tunes sing blowing across deep sands echoes over oceans kissing paradise moonbeams

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Meg Anderson

Date: 1/13/2015 12:00:00 PM

ohhh... I love your line "haunting full lips silver pearl whispers..." just lovely Liam!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/21/2015 11:31:00 AM

meg yeah a mad way i think at times wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2015 4:52:00 PM

romance and nature together. Always lovely.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/21/2015 11:28:00 AM

spend a lot of time with nature andrea it always paints beautiful i think rhank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/11/2015 1:14:00 PM

Reading this entrancing piece has me floating on "magic dust." WOW, Liam, the imagery is super stunning and transporting me into another dimension - great way to start the new year!! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/21/2015 11:25:00 AM

that is for me how i see things wonderful comment pandita deeply appreciated dear friend wishing you a happy year

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/9/2015 6:57:00 PM

wow! this is so magical and so beautifully written.. :)! I especially love the 3rd last stanzas.. :)! wow! olive elois.. :D!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/21/2015 11:14:00 AM

thank you kindly olive dear friend truly very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/9/2015 11:06:00 AM

Liam My Mate!! A most enchanting Couplet here in every respect!! Your imagery is truly marvelous. Very Well-Done. Best Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/21/2015 10:39:00 AM

smiling gary you have me trying out different styles wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/8/2015 10:25:00 AM

:) you have swept me to the stars. Loving your words and your writes with this smile on my face :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/21/2015 10:36:00 AM

thank you casarah for the dazzling beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/8/2015 9:40:00 AM

Hi Liam! Awesome! Another very beautiful romantic love poem, Liam. Just dazzling! A 7 +++from me! I love it!.This is indeed a such a sweet most wonderful, beautiful poem to be held close to ones heart, my dearest friend.smiling.Your Pen is solid Golden! May you feel the presence of God and His Angels protecting you and giving you all their love and strength.Keep your faith your hopes and protect your dreams!. smiling. Wishing you all the best in 2015!Have a very lovely evening!:) Love and hugs! xxoxxox D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/20/2015 3:45:00 PM

thank you dorian for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend