Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

A Sparkling Star

Faraway ambassador of light distant dream sailing ocean waves
begging golden spear of destiny strikes midnight bells ring 

Spotlighting beautiful stunning to the eyes priceless gem 
diamond brightly sparks on a shining jewel treasure find

Mystery shades gasping warm breathless smiles tides turn flutters the heart
beating drum roars as the arrow strikes sexy moonlighting beauty

Hot flushes sweeping deeply skipping flames on magic dust
wishes warm touching inside the darkest night glowing thoughts 

Haunting full lips silver pearl whispers silently dancing tunes sing
blowing across deep sands echoes over oceans kissing paradise moonbeams

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Meg Anderson January 13, 2015 at 12:00 PM ohhh... I love your line "haunting full lips silver pearl whispers..." just lovely Liam! Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 11:31 AM meg yeah a mad way i think at times wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Andrea Dietrich January 11, 2015 at 4:52 PM romance and nature together. Always lovely. Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 11:28 AM spend a lot of time with nature andrea it always paints beautiful i think rhank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Pandita Sietesantos January 11, 2015 at 1:14 PM Reading this entrancing piece has me floating on "magic dust." WOW, Liam, the imagery is super stunning and transporting me into another dimension - great way to start the new year!! Warmest regards. Pandita. Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 11:25 AM that is for me how i see things wonderful comment pandita deeply appreciated dear friend wishing you a happy year

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 9, 2015 at 6:57 PM wow! this is so magical and so beautifully written.. :)! I especially love the 3rd last stanzas.. :)! wow! olive elois.. :D! Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 11:14 AM thank you kindly olive dear friend truly very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Gary Bateman January 9, 2015 at 11:06 AM Liam My Mate!! A most enchanting Couplet here in every respect!! Your imagery is truly marvelous. Very Well-Done. Best Always, Gary Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 10:39 AM smiling gary you have me trying out different styles wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Casarah Nance January 8, 2015 at 10:25 AM :) you have swept me to the stars. Loving your words and your writes with this smile on my face :) Liam Mcdaid January 21, 2015 at 10:36 AM thank you casarah for the dazzling beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter January 8, 2015 at 9:40 AM Hi Liam! Awesome! Another very beautiful romantic love poem, Liam. Just dazzling! A 7 +++from me! I love it!.This is indeed a such a sweet most wonderful, beautiful poem to be held close to ones heart, my dearest friend.smiling.Your Pen is solid Golden! May you feel the presence of God and His Angels protecting you and giving you all their love and strength.Keep your faith your hopes and protect your dreams!. smiling. Wishing you all the best in 2015!Have a very lovely evening!:) Love and hugs! xxoxxox D. Liam Mcdaid January 20, 2015 at 3:45 PM thank you dorian for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend