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A Spaceman's Tall Tale

I think the spaceman tells tall tales I allowed. Others were excited by his stories; I was not wowed. Today he told me about a planet that he caught. And an interplanetary catfish that was full of red snot. They might be true, a girl said to me; her name is Naïve. She was aptly named by parents who had grieved. Because her sister Common Sense had died at birth. I had no words for her, but I felt some mirth.

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Date: 3/5/2022 6:28:00 AM
funny one my friend..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/5/2022 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Eve
Date: 2/25/2022 11:59:00 AM
She was aptly named by parents who had grieved. Because her sister Common Sense had died at birth These lines are wow.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2022 12:19:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 2/24/2022 12:04:00 PM
I would have, too. In fact, I think I might have chuckled in her face. (smirk)(smirk)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2022 12:48:00 PM
I could not resist this because it rhymed so nicely

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