A Spaceman's Tall Tale

I think the spaceman tells tall tales I allowed.
Others were excited by his stories; I was not wowed.
Today he told me about a planet that he caught.
And an interplanetary catfish that was full of red snot.

They might be true, a girl said to me; her name is Naïve.
She was aptly named by parents who had grieved.
Because her sister Common Sense had died at birth.
I had no words for her, but I felt some mirth.
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Roper Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 6:28 AM
funny one my friend..
Krutsinger Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Thank you Eve
Vangaveti Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 11:59 AM
She was aptly named by parents who had grieved. Because her sister Common Sense had died at birth These lines are wow.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Thank you my friend
Hankins Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 12:04 PM
I would have, too. In fact, I think I might have chuckled in her face. (smirk)(smirk)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 12:48 PM
I could not resist this because it rhymed so nicely
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