A Southern Boy With Vivid Dreams

Since early childhood I was aware of my sorroundings;
looking around with the interest of a grown-up man,
waiting for the golden sunrise with rosy streaks
to rise from beyond the Paterno Mountain...
to dazzle a southern boy with vivid dreams.


The clock-tower, in the Fallen Soldiers memorial square wreath-adorned,
stroke seven to announce the coming of a quite day
in a valley, where orange blossoms strongly perfumed
welcoming spring in all its daintiness and cheerfulness...
as shallows retuned home flying over pines groves covered with gray.


My chestnut-colored hair was gently brushed by a whimsical breeze,
spreading the scent of jasmine's bushes wilting down;
that's where robins took shelter when the summer sun
was at its hightest peak and trees glistened and swayed to please
a curious and adventurous southern boy with vivid dreams. 


Ever wondered how I had gotten to be an elaborate poet in childhood days,
exploring everything to express myself in the most unique ways?
It was love of Nature and its splendor breathed in with appreciation  
that made me who I am today, and wiping away the tears of golden age,
I feel the fanthom of my presence wandering down a silent lane swarmed with sage.


Night came with willowy shadows, carrying out their nocturanl task...
not to frighten me, but to bring the brilliance of gleaming stars so perfectly aligned;
and I dreamed with relief, knowing that there would be no endless wait
to be overwhelmed with a mystery only revealed to a child with vivid dreams.
I looked further above, beyond the stunning, starry sky as the brightest light shined.    


The country I am writing about is Italy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Deborah Guzzy's contest "Somewhere Over the Rainbow". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Congrats on the firsy place win, Andrew
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 11:59 AM
A beautiful write Andrew. Congratulations on taking the number one spot in this contest. Italy is indeed beautiful and I couldn't help writing about it too. Aloha, Connie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Congrats Andrew on your 1st place win in Debbie's contest .. an awesome and amazing write and a special win for u to enjoy my friend.. with luv..
Richards Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 11:29 AM
Wonderfully written, as always, Andrew!! Makes me know even more, and want to be there! Well done! ~ Carrie
Taylor Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Congrats, Andy. Awesome write. Nice going. All the best. Ralph
Guzzi Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Congrad's on your well deserved win! YOU ARE #1. Light & Love always
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 6:26 PM
Yes, change your form so you can be correctly entered in Deb's contest, Andrew, since she is not allowing narrative. this could just as well be free verse I suppose. It is lovely. Good luck, Andrew, Luv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 8:02 AM
A real contest winner in FREE VERSE ;) ;) ;) since narrative form is not allowed in this contest ya'll...bella? Please with sugar fix form label you are the KING of FREE VERSE....your majesty!
Fox Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 1:20 PM
What a lovely poem , I've always wanted to go to southern Italy I reckon the food might be even better there, Northern Italy is nice though they seem to dream a lot of the the south ha ha !
Culverhouse Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Is Italy a rocky place? It always seems that way in pictures.
A  Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:01 AM
THE image is so clear Crisci, loved your write.-SKAT
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