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"a Soup Has Unity"

Form Borrowed From "Limerick Form." A soup has unity of, if you please Potatoes, tomatoes, carrots and peas But a house divided Is of minds decided Love foremost __ a toast, if you please!!!!! When our little house is divided `Tis of different mind’s decided I believe the civil war Has been fought, thus far Only depictions of mind’s fictions, linger!!!! There is a rhyming of hearts' chiming A narration of Sacred Heart’s patience A pose, sacred of heart flows Heart’s freedom of verse, disperse A short verse, a long, deserves not the thong!!! Mind’s education__ can be ill fated If with it’s Sacred Heart not mated Of mind is Separated Of heart is love mated Consummate, Adam and Eve, please!!!! 1.Complete marriage: to make a marriage legally complete and fully valid by having spiritual intercourse, the Mind with it’s Sacred Heart.!!!!! Inspired by: The Adam and Eve contest Sponsored by: Deborah and Linda-Marie (Not entered)

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Date: 6/29/2010 9:07:00 PM
hmmm, i had never seen this one, john. Quite nicely done!! And I ended up having a perfectly lovely day. I just took a different route, a highway I was already familiar with, and everything fell into place! Now I am really tired and I better quit my souping very soon! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/24/2010 11:56:00 PM
this was a fun read. and very thoughtful, a soup really can come together with the minds of one thing in common. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/23/2010 11:04:00 AM
Brilliant, John, and I can understand the source of your inspiration through the contest as well as other happenings. Very insightful words. Love, Carolyn
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