John Freeman Poet Rhyme

"a Soup Has Unity"

Form Borrowed From "Limerick Form."

A soup has unity of, if you please
Potatoes, tomatoes, carrots and peas
But a house divided
Is of minds decided
Love foremost __ a toast, if you please!!!!!

When our little house is divided
`Tis of different mind’s decided
I believe the civil war
Has been fought, thus far
Only depictions of mind’s fictions, linger!!!!

There is a rhyming of hearts' chiming
A narration of  Sacred Heart’s patience
A pose, sacred of heart flows
Heart’s freedom of verse, disperse
A short verse, a long, deserves not the thong!!!

Mind’s education__ can be ill fated
If with it’s Sacred Heart not mated
Of mind is Separated  
Of heart is love mated
Consummate, Adam and Eve, please!!!!

1.Complete marriage: to make a marriage legally complete and fully valid by having spiritual 
intercourse, the Mind with it’s Sacred Heart.!!!!! 

Inspired by: The Adam and Eve contest
 Sponsored by: Deborah and Linda-Marie
(Not entered)

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Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2010 at 9:07 PM hmmm, i had never seen this one, john. Quite nicely done!! And I ended up having a perfectly lovely day. I just took a different route, a highway I was already familiar with, and everything fell into place! Now I am really tired and I better quit my souping very soon! Luv, Andrea

Lynette Chachere May 24, 2010 at 11:56 PM this was a fun read. and very thoughtful, a soup really can come together with the minds of one thing in common. -Always&Forever Lynette

Carolyn Devonshire May 23, 2010 at 11:04 AM Brilliant, John, and I can understand the source of your inspiration through the contest as well as other happenings. Very insightful words. Love, Carolyn