Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

A Soul Untouched

by Michael J Falotico

                                            A spring leaf fell in my hands..
                                    With time it aged as the drop of sands..

                                   Now the lines on the leaf reflect my own..
                              And fresh colors fade as bright ones are shown..

                                 Seasons do past as time does take it's toll..
                                   Only with me, time doesn't touch my soul..

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Wilma Neels August 21, 2011 at 1:12 PM Just love your end line Mr. F :) beautiful write, love WNN

Dinda Minardi August 21, 2011 at 11:42 AM Great, Michael. I love the last line, "Only with me, time doesn't touch my soul". Our outside can be changed, our inside should stay the same. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2011 at 11:36 AM as your words touch many souls here Michael..especially mine luv.. soup mail.. the collab by us is already posted before we left for vacation luv..so just post it from that Michael.. your J.G. in Florida mode ... with luv always and forever...

Cory Long August 21, 2011 at 10:33 AM this is great!! nicely penned my friend, check out our poem I posted it! It looks great!!