A Soul That Loves You and Will Forever!

Disgusted and overjoyed that your back stares me in face
I am finally departed,forever and ever,from your life's race
your enormous passion and deep love made me weak-a disgrace
without you I was incomplete and time slowed sour in pace
did I hurt you on purpose to shake myself out of you yeah,brace
you have the lover's sack
do not come back.

A soul that loves you and will forever!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 5:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:33 PM
gupta, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 22, 2015 at 8:04 PM
Shishri :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 4:14 AM
Beautiful write Shishir, I love it. HAVE A GOOD YEAR 2012 ! OXOX hugs from Anne-Lise
Mehta Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 11:08 PM
A nicely penned poem.
Goff Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 2:07 AM
sincere emotions understood by all, well done! Shishir! jimbo
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