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A Song To Wakeup Butterfly

Oh my Beautiful Butterfly, I want to see you fly; Why are you resting inside the pupa? Come on! It's time to wake up; Don’t be shy to fly, Oh Dear! Your limit is sky; We have seen too many colors, But your’s is so special to us. Come out quick with flying colors, I want to see you flutter. Will you land on my hand? Or will you fly to see your friend? No issues about that baby. I just want to see you fly;

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Date: 2/17/2021 6:23:00 AM
What a delicate and lovely first poem. So sorry it has taken me 5 years to discover it. Blessings Richard.
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Date: 8/21/2019 2:44:00 PM
what a cute first post at Soup. I am surprised I never saw it before because I often go see the first post of a poet when I cannot find new poems of theirs to read. I see also this got a third place in a contest some time ago. A very belated congrats for that.
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Date: 7/26/2016 1:45:00 PM
Very lovely Supraja! Congratulations on your third place win! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/26/2016 8:39:00 AM
Congrats Supraja, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/26/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you so much...
Date: 7/26/2016 8:09:00 AM
This was quite the lovely read, made me smile. Congratulations, and welcome!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/26/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you so much.. Glad you enjoyed it...
Date: 7/25/2016 4:52:00 PM
Supraja Kannan,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/26/2016 3:19:00 AM
Thank you so much....
Date: 5/9/2016 2:26:00 PM
Delightful piece, and welcome to the Soup.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 5/12/2016 7:06:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 4/7/2016 6:51:00 AM
Such lovely imagery Supraja - spread your poetic wings and you will fly:-) have fun on soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 4/7/2016 7:04:00 AM
Thank u so much for your kind words....
Date: 4/7/2016 6:07:00 AM
Supraja, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 4/7/2016 6:33:00 AM
Thanks to you indeed for taking your precious time to read the poem. I am a newbie and this is my very first poem. I would really appreciate any feedback you can give me.I have read your poems. Your poems are awesome.Something to aspire to.Thanks again for stopping by and for your support. Regards, Supraja

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