A Song of Love

Im in such bliss,
  From the first time, 
We ever kissed.
  Never knew love,
Could feel like this.

There where others
  That came & went
They lack the patience,
  To give love a chance.

Our love grows stronger
  Everyday.
As youthful features
  Slowly, diminish away.

Our hearts soar like,
  Its just the beginning.
There where times, when
  We second guessed.
That tested our emotional 
Distress.

But we kept the faith, and
  Carried on.
Acknowledged & requested
  A feeling, that couldn't go
Wrong.

Never had anyone, who really
  Cared.
To subside & breakdown my
  Interior fears.

Magnified by unconditional love
  Supported & bound, by one anothers 
Trust.
Cant imagine being, with anyone else
  We are so truly blessed.

My heart breaks & disburse into a million 
  Pieces.
I never thought id be a witness,
 Thats grown into a love like this.

The mind at peace & content
  With our decision.
To take on this journey
  Of what we were given.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kilmer Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 7:27 PM
Another great wrtie. thanks for reaching out. It means a lot to me. I am very quiet and shy when it comes to these kind of things. Don't let that scare you. Love this one. Kilmer
Thomas Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 7:43 PM
Hi kilmer Thankyou means alot to me:)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 3:26 PM
Nice poem Cherie, you know I'm a sucker for love. I like -Good Job on this! Sent you a couple of soup parcels as well!
Thomas Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 7:29 PM
Thanks marquis I replied....a sucker for love lol aren't we all:) appreciate your kindness....ty4 commenting, means alot....cherie<3
Posey Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 6:05 AM
I love to witness the effect brought on people by the realization that the love they have found is real and they can really listen to their hearts.... That's when commitment and trust come into being. I feel your excitement of a new found love.... Hugs... Jake
Thomas Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 11:14 PM
Hi jake,,, thanks so much for your beautiful comment. I think love is a beautiful gift,,,..i just wrote it from a past experience.I had originally wrote this as a song with a chorus but changed it to a poem. Appreciate you taking time out to comment thanks so much.....~<3~ cherie
Susan Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 12:40 PM
the poem is really good .very romantic
Thomas Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 4:37 PM
Hi shreyas, thanks really, appreciate your comment:)
Thomas Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Thanks Anne, so glad you enjoyed.it thank you for your lovely comment:) appreciate, it....
Andresen Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 1:08 AM
- A beautiful poem, it was enjoyable to read. - Thank you Cherie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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