A Song For Brian

the sky glows in pastel pink as the wind whispers~ a song for Brian

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2024 12:48:00 PM

Did he ever see this? Or is it a Brian not from Soup?

Jcb Brul
Date: 8/19/2024 4:40:00 AM

Hi Andie. He saw this because this was entered in his contest (Monoku)and won. This was a tribute for Brian Strand.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/18/2024 9:23:00 AM

Dear Jcb, poignant beauty fills the page and one's imagination with so few syllables. A splendid, emotive and evocative gem, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/11/2023 5:48:00 AM

Outstanding Monoku with stunning description! Love ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2023 12:48:00 PM

a beauty!!

Tom Woody

Date: 8/19/2023 6:22:00 AM

Gorgeous one line poetic vista. I'm there in awe

Silent One

Date: 8/17/2023 1:43:00 PM

Great one liner with lovely imagery..

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/8/2023 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your triumphant victory, JCB. A melodious ode to Brian, as the heavens adorn themselves with a delicate hue of pastel pink and the gentle breeze softly imparts its secrets. Thanks for your comment on my page

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2023 7:18:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara