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A song

wind rain Original music spun twilight Dreams given

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 10/22/2010 1:22:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:46:00 PM
Oh, I really like the mood this modern haiku sets, Randall. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:09:00 PM
I can hear and see the scene..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:03:00 PM
Randall, This is a remarkable Haiku! I feel it and I love it.......... As Always, Shar
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