A Song

wind rain 
Original music spun twilight
Dreams given
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 22, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Interesting use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing. Karen
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October 19, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Oh, I really like the mood this modern haiku sets, Randall. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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October 19, 2010 at 3:09 PM
I can hear and see the scene..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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October 19, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Randall, This is a remarkable Haiku! I feel it and I love it.......... As Always, Shar
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