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A Sonata By Moonlight

Dancing in the moonlight Fanciful figures appear in the mist With flowing white gowns And a crown of pink lilacs exist Love conquers the coldest of hearts Turns men into little boys As peaceful as a sonata by moonlight In its tenderness we all rejoice True love is really beyond description It can't be expressed in words This feeling down in the pit of our being It's the sweetest poem ever heard Without love to help see us through Life would be unfulfilling Darkness would settle deep in our souls So make sure love has top billing

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/16/2022 3:58:00 PM

Hello Happy Jack, I can vision a couple feeling true love, dancing in the moonlight. Under the full moon and shining stars all night long. Love, Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/17/2022 12:32:00 PM

Hello Happy Jack, yes fun. Love, Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/16/2022 4:09:00 PM

WOW you've got it love... fun eh! Love from me to you sweet Darlene! XOX

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/16/2022 1:33:00 PM

A tender and beautiful write, dear Jack! To not experience love is tragic. Even if it is a deep love for a friend. Marriage often tenders the greatest love. My dad and mom shared one heart! God bless, dear Jack. Hope you read my “Fiddle-Faddle Footle.” ;) :) ~ hugs

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/16/2022 1:48:00 PM

Thank you dear sweet Kim!!!! Your mom and dad shared a special love affair! Very special... love Jack XOX

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/16/2022 6:51:00 AM

Hello Happy Jack, the world needs a lot of love spread out to to those that need it. love, Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/16/2022 3:01:00 PM

Hello Happy Jack, yes there are many that need it right now. ove, Darlene xxx-oooo.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/16/2022 6:57:00 AM

And there are many many who need it right now!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX

Sand Blown

Date: 3/16/2022 12:39:00 AM

...'...true love is....in the pit of our being'. .....also....there being no clocks in the pit means the pit not be (for) a time-being .....making life a little more comfortable ....stan sand

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/16/2022 5:26:00 AM

WOW!!! Holy poop... what a fantastic review my favourite REVIEWER! Going to put this one in a special "HOLY POOP" file! OOOOEEEE! Have a happy...........

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/15/2022 9:26:00 AM

I like it, Jack, from beginning to end. Particularly agree that we must make "sure love has top billing."

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/15/2022 9:29:00 AM

Top billing for sure... nothing comes even close!!! Cheers my friend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/15/2022 4:24:00 AM

The world would be lost without it and right now it needs a lot more. Tom

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/15/2022 4:37:00 AM

You sure have that right Sir Thomas!