A Solitude of Praise

Waves and winds comfort me
 As I toss in fitful dreams.

 The universe covers my head,
 Sand gives my bones a humble bed

 Oh, how much I'll fill this spot,
 With all the memories I've got!

 And tell this place how much I care,
 Of loved ones, whose souls I've shared. 
         
 While seeking life in all its scope,
 Their why I'll hold fast to hope.
 
 A world for food, one for delight,
 Morning, noon and in the night.
 
 Each day when I say my prayers,
 I'll thank God who truly cares.

 Then count my blessing on earth,
  A task too easily I've shirked.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 5:20 PM
Each day when I say my prayers, I'll thank God who truly cares. Then count my blessing on earth, A task too easily I've shirked...We all do shirk this from time to time for we get to taking things for granted..Sara
Callaway Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 6:55 PM
I appreciate you taking the time to leave this:) Kathy
Cervenka Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Very nice overall, and the rhyme scheme feel natural not forced. Nicely done ~jan (PS. Their=They're)
Callaway Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 4:56 PM
Thanks so much for the comment! Windy
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