A Solitary Teardrop

She sat huddled up in fleecy blanket
shaking and trembling, mutters to her self 
it has not yet sunk in, this painful loss
that sears her breaking heart with terrible grief

A solitary teardrop falling down

She thought of the fun and love they shared
the strolls they had enjoyed in leafy woods
the way he had snuggled up close to her
his warm breath brushing her ear as they slept

A solitary teardrop falling down

Over in the kitchen corner his bowls
along with a comfy bed seldom used
she needed to put them away out of sight
yet devastated she had little strength  

A solitary teardrop falling down

She wished  the tears would flow healing her
yet though they trembled within her eye lids
she could not seem to release them but they stung
just one escaped and rolled down her face

A solitary teardrop falling down


this was inspired by a poem called Once upon A Teardrop by Steven Davies from Wales
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rogers Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 11:48 AM
You know I was born in "Harlem (Street's Underbelly, USA)-No Castles!...smile, but, since you asked "Teach", I'll give it a shot!...smile. OBTW, please go back and read my poem for you Yesterday challenge, I revised and I think it is much better. I'd love your opinion on the revised work. Robert Huuuggggggs & Kisssssses
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 11:50 AM
certainly will Robert and enter it in the yesterday contest on here it will do well Shadow x smile hug
Rogers Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 11:28 AM
"SUPRISE"..."deja' vu"...smile This poem is sad & lovely Linda, But I "Hate" the senriment! mumbling I had just let my precious little darlin' out for her Mornin' Romp when I read this...so sad. If I ever lost my little love heart beating more than a tear would fall, "I'D DIE"!!! Again, another poem of yours that has touched me personally and very deeply... Great Write "Teach" Robert Huuuugggggs, & Kisssssesss
Rogers Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 11:47 AM
You know I was born in "Harlem (Street's Underbelly, USA)-No Castles!...smile, but, since you asked "Teach", I'll give it a shot!...smile. OBTW, please go back and read my poem for you Yesterday challenge, I revised and I think it is much better. I'd love your opinion on the revised work. Robert Huuuggggggs & Kisssssses
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 11:38 AM
hi Robert welcome to soup we are one big happy family and the poems here are awesome do enter my current contest Castles So nice to see you here dear Shadow x smile hug
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 8:43 AM
Change sleep to slept and this will be perfection. It was a cool twist when I realized it was a dog you were writing about. I just love it Shadow.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 11:48 AM
A big hug back.
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 11:36 AM
ty Rick have done it ty Shadow x smile hug
A  Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Shadow, I can relate to the solitary confinement. At times, I feel as if nothing heals the broken heart. I know I'm not alone, however at times I feel the need to escape. Skat
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:42 AM
yes me too Skat these days I prefer a solitary life lol ty Shadow x smile hug
Williams Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Shadow animals are kids to some people and their loss is just as great...David
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:21 AM
I agree David I know mine are and they are also my loyal friends ty Shadow x smile hug
Sivey Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:01 AM
This is an immensely heartfelt write my friend! I am saddened by your tender words you have expressed here Shadow! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a lovely piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:08 AM
ty Russell for your inspiring comments very much appreciated Shadow x smile hug
Kayode Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Excellence is your trade mark Shadow. The emphasis achieved by the repetition of '' A solitary teardrop falling down '' is super. You have done it again. Kayod5
Hamilton Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:10 AM
hi Kayod5 ty for your awesome comments Shadow x smile hug
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 5:29 AM
- Missed deeply ... beautiful and touching, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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